求大神幫檢查下面的英語文章的語法錯誤和一些不當(dāng)?shù)牡胤?標(biāo)注出來的修改~
The final exam is coming soon,you review?
I have two courses didn't review,yesterday evening,I stole a lazy,surf the Internet to see a make me shocked news.
What's the story?Quick to say
Guangdong development bank of a branch President was sentenced to death sentence with a reprieve corruption more than 3000 yuan...
My goodness,it will happen!
Yes,in order to money can disregard everything,even do illegal crime thing.I've heard that there are various for the money and go to bad things,such as college students robbery,even if they have a good education level,still can't help them to resist the lure of money,is really a with bitter hatred!In my opinion,money is the root of evil!
I don't think so,I think that money is the root of happiness,with money you can buy what you want,and live a happy life,just think,if you don't have to worry every day after money,eat,drink,do you like things,enjoy life,the happiness!
Oh,no,some people just because want him ability is outside the scope of things,just on the way of illegal crime.
But some celebrities,such as Jackie chan,jet li,Bill Gates and so on,they have enough money and then also to help people in the poor areas.If I had money,I also will often give money to charity,to help those who need help.
Do you remember SanLu milk powder events - it is not the business interests driven by money and do the terrible things,the harm so many baby's health,this kind of behavior is really a spurn!
Well,you two,stop it money what is the root of happiness or the root of evil depends on a person's mentality,if a person use the money to help others,make the society more harmonious,so money is the root of happiness,if he for money and harm social interests,then there is no doubt that money is the root of evil!
Yes,you're right
有些人就是因為想得到他能力范圍之外的東西，才走上違法犯罪的道路。
但是一些名人，例如成龍，李連杰，比爾蓋茨等等，他們有了足夠的錢然后還去幫助貧困地區(qū)的人們。如果我有錢了，我也會經(jīng)常捐錢給慈善機(jī)構(gòu)的，
你們還記得三鹿奶粉事件吧，那難道不是這些商家受到利益金錢的驅(qū)使而做下這種傷天害理的事情，危害了那么多嬰兒的身體健康，這種行為真是令人唾棄！
好了好了，你們倆停下來吧，錢到底是幸福的根源還是罪惡的根源是取決于一個人的心態(tài)的，如果一個人用錢去幫助別人，讓這個社會更加和諧，那么錢就是幸福的根源，如果他為了金錢利益而危害社會，那么毫無疑問金錢是罪惡的根源！
嗯嗯，你說的對~