幫助英文文章改錯(cuò)
英語牛人幫忙,雖然本人是英語牛人團(tuán)團(tuán)員,但這份題目非常重要,因此想做到100％,而且,這是新加坡中學(xué)題目,估計(jì)至少相當(dāng)于四級(jí),請(qǐng)諸位幫幫小弟.
這是一篇采訪稿,內(nèi)有20個(gè)錯(cuò)誤（全部語法,不要費(fèi)勁找單詞拼寫錯(cuò)誤或標(biāo)點(diǎn)符號(hào)錯(cuò)誤,只能修改,不能添加或刪除）,為了方便,每段話我都加了號(hào)碼,不過這是一整篇文章,你們說幾號(hào)的哪里錯(cuò)了,應(yīng)該改為什么,找不夠20個(gè)沒關(guān)系,能找?guī)讉€(gè)找?guī)讉€(gè),集思廣益沒問題,
1.Interviewer:How long did the journey takes?
2.Miss Li:About fifteen minutes.There was a good bus service where I live.
3.Interviewer:What attracted you to the present job?
4.
Miss Li:I am feeling that a job in the sales department would provide
me with the experience I am needing.I also am thinking that your firm
is well establish and the prospects are good.
5.Interviewer:Could I know something about your education?
6.
Miss Li:I complete my O-levels（劍橋O水準(zhǔn),新加坡的中考） three years ago and last
year I have taken three A levels（劍橋A水準(zhǔn),新加坡的高考）in Economics,Commerce and
History.
7.Interviewer:And what did you do since then?
8.
Miss Li:For the past I worked as a stenographer in a small firm.The
pay is all right but the work is not challenging enough and I feel I am
not learning very much.
9.Interviewer:What are your present duties and responisbilities?
10.
Miss Li:I do a few shorthand,typing and filing.But I have less
responsibilities than my colleagues.I would be much more better in my
works if I had more duties.
11.Interviewer:So you find the work a little dull?Have you spoken to your supervisor about this?
12.MIss Li:Yes,we discussed about the matter at our last meeting but he said he could not let me to do more wokr unless I can carry it on efficiently.If you think I can take what it has to get this job,I am prepared to do a more challenging work.