請(qǐng)英語(yǔ)老師幫我看一下 這兩篇文章有沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤
文章一
There is a widespread concern over the issue that________（作文題目）But it is well known that the opinion concerning this hot topic varies from person to person.(開(kāi)頭一般題目給出) The majority think that________（觀點(diǎn)一）.First of all,________（原因一）.Furthermore,________（原因二）.So it goes without saying that________（觀點(diǎn)一）.People,however,differ in their opinions on this matter.Some people hold the view that________（觀點(diǎn)二）.On the one hand,________（原因一）.On the other hand,________（原因二）.Therefore,there is no doubt that ________（觀點(diǎn)二） As far as I am concerned,I firmly support the view that觀點(diǎn)一或二.It is not only because ________(原因一),but also because ________.（原因二）It's high time that________.(喊口號(hào)) Only in this way eventually can we ________（支持這一觀點(diǎn)的結(jié)果）
文章二
In recent days,we have to face a problem________A,which ,surprisingly ,is becoming more and more serious.First of all,________(說(shuō)明A的現(xiàn)狀)．Secondly,________(舉例進(jìn)一步說(shuō)明現(xiàn)狀)Confronted with A,we should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation.For one thing,________(解決方法一).For another,________(解決方法二).Finally,________解決方法三).Personally,I believe that ________(我的解決方法).Consequently,I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________(帶來(lái)的好處).