Climbing is my favourite sport.I am very fond it,especially in later autumn.One day early in the morning,my friends and I put our sports shoes and started off.After climbing for half an hour,we got at the top of the mountain.There we have a good view miles around.To the north,a big river crossed the city.There were much ships sail busily.A lot of beautiful trees,too.The sun started to go down,for it was time for us to go back.In the way back,we were laughing and talking all the times.We had a good time that day.
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