把我改作文：Great changes in my hometown
個位英語高手給個分數(shù),然后把我改一下,本人高三（不好意思水平很爛,在沖刺階段,英語更加要充實）
Great changes in my hometown
I remember when I was a child ,my hometown was only a small city, And the fields were not far from my home. So if you want ti have a good breath, you could walk to that fields for having a good breath.
Now, about 15 years ago, my hometown has great changes. For example:every fields were changed into the big buildings ,and there are more and more cars across on the street here and there. But if you want to relax and have a good breath,you’d better to find the fields from the city edge..
I’m pleased to have this developed hometown, but I’ll never forget the home which was clean and beaut before then.
一定要先給個分數(shù),我估一下我月考的分數(shù)!謝謝!
總分就是15分!