ERIC來(lái)廣州出差,他打算花一天的時(shí)間逛逛廣州.但是擔(dān)心時(shí)間不夠,他列下了在廣州要游覽的地方.
Eric went on business trip in Guang Zhou and intended to spend one single day look over there.But what he worried
about was that the time was not enough to do that.So he make a list of where he wanted to visit.
他最先想去的地方是越秀公園.越秀公園雖然四周擴(kuò)建了一些現(xiàn)代便民設(shè)施,但它仍然是一個(gè)吸引游人和附近居民的地方.讓他最為震撼的是位于山頂?shù)逆?zhèn)海樓里陳列了許多不同朝代的歷史珍寶.

The place he wanted to go most was Yue Xiu parkwhere attracts a plenty of tourists and habitants because of the the construction around it.what amazed him mostis the Zhen Hai tower in which displaysa lot of treasures of history in different dynasties

接著參觀的是中山紀(jì)念堂,它包括了一個(gè)壯觀的紀(jì)念堂和一樽紀(jì)念孫中山的雕像.最后他以夜游珠江結(jié)束了他的旅程.ERIC看到許多燈火輝煌的大廈企力在珠江兩岸.


The next stop is Zhong Shan memorial which is comprised of a grand that and sculpture ofSun Yat-sen.He ended up visiting The Pearl River(or: the Zhujiang River).Eric have seen that many brightly-lit mansions stand in both sides of the river.
雖然四周擴(kuò)建了一些現(xiàn)代便民設(shè)施,但它仍然是一個(gè)吸引游人和附近居民的地方.
以上這句話,應(yīng)該是因果關(guān)系吧!因?yàn)樗闹軘U(kuò)建了一些現(xiàn)代便民設(shè)就行了,所以它是一個(gè)吸引游人和附近居民的地方.
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