請英語高手幫我點(diǎn)評一下我的這篇英語四級作文.
1有些人認(rèn)為某些數(shù)字會帶來好運(yùn)
2 也有些人認(rèn)為數(shù)字與運(yùn)氣無關(guān)
3 試說明自己的看法
From the ancient times to the present,there are some people think that the number have magic power and some good numbers will bring them good luck.Many Chinese businessman like the number of 8 and they hold that it means wealth.Most importantly,it will let their business getting better and better.Morover,a part of high school students,especially the students who are about to attend the university entrance examination.They like to choose the seats which number is "8","18","28"."38"or "58",because they considered the number will help them to pass the exam or enter the university easily.
Tough some people think that the good numbers will bring good luck to themselves,but a section of people hold whatever they are lucky or not ,it is unconcemed with the good nimber or bad number.They believe in if a people who are working hard or studying hard,he should become a lucky man.On the centrary,the lazy people who always stay at home and haven't work,but he often hope a good number of 8 will bring good luck to themselves,it just a dream!
As far as I'm concerned,I think it is absurd that a good number can help us to pass the exam or get more money.So every people should work or study hardly and shouldn't make a fetish os a good number,such as "8","18" or "28".