以上的翻譯實(shí)在蹩腳,完全背離歌詞的意境,應(yīng)當(dāng)感受作者的情感結(jié)合直譯和意譯方可.比如如下翻譯：
I saw you this morning.
今晨 我遇見你
You were moving so fast.
而你卻匆匆離去
Can't seem to loosen my grip
可我卻念念不忘
On the past.
那些逝去的時(shí)光
And I miss you so much.
我是如此思念你
Theres no one in sight.
卻再也追不回了
And were still making love
可我們過去的恩愛依然
In My Secret Life.
在我的內(nèi)心深處
I smile when Im angry.
我用微笑掩飾憤怒
I cheat and I lie.
我會(huì)欺騙和說謊
I do what I have to do
我身不由己
To get by.
只為茍且偷生
But I know what is wrong.
但我知道什么是錯(cuò)
And I know what is right.
也知道什么是對(duì)
And Id die for the truth
也愿為真理去死
In My Secret Life.
在我的內(nèi)心深處
Hold on,hold on,my brother.
堅(jiān)持,堅(jiān)持,我的兄弟
My sister,hold on tight.
我的姐妹,一起堅(jiān)持
I finally got my orders.
我終將沖破困境
Ill be marching through the morningMarching through the night,
沖破黑夜 沖破黎明
Moving cross the borders
穿越我內(nèi)心的藩籬
Of My Secret Life.
在我的內(nèi)心深處
Looked through the paper.
看破紙樣的紅塵
Makes you want to cry.
令人黯然淚流
Nobody cares if the people
沒有人關(guān)心誰(shuí)
Live or die.
是活著還是死去
And the dealer wants you thinking
神賜予了你思想
That its either black or white.
它明辨黑白
Thank God its not that simple
它不是這么幼稚
In My Secret Life
在我的內(nèi)心深處
I bite my lip.
我咬緊雙唇
I buy what I'm told.
我一言不發(fā)
from the latest hit to the wisdom of old.
聽從了所有的教誨
but I'm always alone and my heart is like ice and it's crowded and cold,
但是我的內(nèi)心卻一直充滿孤獨(dú)與無助
in my secret life.
在我的內(nèi)心深處